4. When Bazooka Joe joined the Yakusa nobody dared to call him Yakusa Joe, even though he wore a Kanji tatoo on his elbow.
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4. When Bazooka Joe joined the Yakusa, nobody dared to call him Yakusa Joe even though he wore a kanji tattoo on his elbow.
1) Set off "When Bazooka Joe joined the yakusa" with a comma because it is a dependent clause. (1pt.)
2) The comma after Yakusa Joe should be removed because "even though he wore a kanji tattoo on his elbow" is a dependent clause that occurs after the main clause. (1 pt.)
3) Kanji is a foreign word that refers to letters of an ancient ideogrammatic alphabet; therefore it is not capitalized.(1 pt.)
4) Tattoo is spelled with two t's. (1 pt.)
Total = 4 pts.