Correct all grammar, punctuation, capitalization, spelling, usage errors.
(1 pt. a piece for each error)
1. Joan Collins scorning the critics of
her latest attempt at nuptial bliss was gladdened by the attitude of Tara
her eldest daughter who congratulated her mother's new husband who is two
years her junior.
2. Barry wished he was a horse so that the
stable boy who he was interested in would have to clean up after him, and
comb him in the late afternoon.
3. The airport security guard knew that
he could of scored a fingernail clipper from the rock star, who ironically
enough was a strong believer in personal hygiene.
4. John Thomas' new hot tub was too hot
and it made him turn redder than a portuguese tomato.
5. Because he saw a picture of it on the
Internet Alex whispered to Jenny, "that there was a new Mcdonald's going
up near mars this month."
6. Emperor Hirohito of Japan decided to
get a new boxspring and mattress, so that he wouldn't get bounced around at
night by his wife who was dreaming of becoming a Sumo wrestler.
7. While laying underneath the dinning room
table, Philip seen the build up of animal dander, and consequently he understood
it was time to get his air ducts cleaned by his cousin, who had helped him
before, and had just gotten out of prison.
Correct the following passive voice constructions. [3 pts. each] (Be careful
to keep the same tense as the original!)
8. Winston, Santa's most outgoing elf in
purchasing, was met by a gregarious salesman whose teeth reminded him a little
of a young Godzilla.
9.The compassionate one, Haji, informed
Mr. Kipling that his pet elephant had been struck down that afternoon during
the thunderstorm.
Correct the following error(s) with run-ons and fragments.[3 pts each]
10. The politically-correct doctor performed
a hystorectomy on the woman's husband too. Believing that such an operation
was unfairly performed exclusively on women.
11. Originally, yabusame archers competed
as a form of prayer, and those who missed their clay or wooden targets were
obliged to commit suicide, but the practice went out of date in the 12th century
after emperors realized they were losing too many skilled warriors.
12. Careful to measure the shower stall
before he used it, Jon-Jon, the two-ton gorilla, wedged himself into the space
and lathered up, however, he had forgotten to bring along his favorite towel
with the picture of Betty Boop on it.
Write a sentence which includes the following parts of speech: 1) a restrictive
relative clause 2) noun clause 3) passive voice [5 pts.: 1 pt for the noun
clause; 2pts. for the restricitive relative clause; 2 pts. for the passive
voice]
13.